Yesterday my group work with Mrs Anderson about stretching our sentences in our writing. We learnt how to use the five w's to make our sentences more interesting and hook in the reader.
I really like your presentation it's really good, I also like how you start with a simple sentence and then you start to make your sentence more fascinating.
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Hey Sebastian,
I really like your presentation it's really good, I also like how you start with a simple sentence and then you start to make your sentence more fascinating.
Keep up the marvelous work,
Halaiano
Thank you Halaiano!
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