- It was midnight, as Will was climbing the rocky wall at the park. He was trying to reach the top so that he could gaze at the beautiful moon.
- It was midnight, as Will climbed the rocky wall at the park, trying to reach the top to gaze at the beautiful glowing moon.
Today LS2 worked on stretching our sentences using and acronym, DRAFT.(Delete, Rearrange, Add, Fix, Talk)
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