My Comments

This is my two comments to room 9 and room 4.

Basic Fact Games

This is me and John playing a basic fact game I enjoyed practicing my basic facts next time I would do even better.

XtraMaths results

These are my XtraMath results. I got seventeen wrong and the rest right. I need to practice addition so I can get to subtraction.

My Quality Comment

I am learning to make quality comments. Here is my comment to Joshua.

I have made a thoughtful and positive comment.

Learning to Make a Quality Blog Comment

I am learning to make quality blog comments. Here is my comment to Tai.

I have made a thoughtful and helpful comment.

Monday Quick Writes

Invisible For a Day

If I was invisible for a day there would be a lot of things I would do. The first thing I would do is sneak into the rides at Spookers. It would be fun being invisible because you could do anything. I would dress up as a floating ghost and scare everyone that comes to my house on Halloween.

I would dress up and prank people that walk past. If I was in visible I could also work as a top secret spy and sneak up on enemy. I could become a part of the army and plant bombs without anybody seeing me or attack an enemy from behind. I would set a surprise party for my family.

Another thing I would do is try and make things invisible so I can make my friends invisible and we can go and run around on the road with my friends at night. I would also scare my friends at school. And when its time to go sleep I will sneak in to the fridge and eat all the food.

It would be fun to be invisible even for a day.

Panmure Bridge Beach Picnic

"Hurry Mum!" I yelled out to my mum. I don't want to be late for the beach picnic. I jumped out of the car and raced to my class. I was so excited to go to the Eastern Beach with the whole school. As I hopped off the bus the wind strongly nearly pushed me over. I sat and watched the year seven and eights in the kayaks with Mr Johnson.

It was time for morning tea so we had to have to have something little to eat. Soon it was Room Seven's turn to play on the sand. Mrs Miller told us to make sea animals made out of sand. I made a big turtle with Tai, Riley and Brandon and Nesi and Victoria made a starfish. Mrs Miller took a picture of our sea animals we made. When the year seven and eights came back from kayaking I played touch with them on the sand.

After that Mr Johnson talked on the speaker saying it was Room Seven's turn to swim in the water. I didn't want swim yet because I wanted to wait for the waves to get bigger. Then it was lunch time and I was starving hungry. I pulled out my chicken sandwich and gobbled it down. Mr Johnson was speaking again saying it was Room Seven Eight and Five's turn to play in the water. Now I was ready to swim in the water because it was windy and the waves were getting bigger. I was playing and swimming around until Mr Johnson said it was time to get out and get changed but I didn't want to get out so when Mr Johnson said Room ix and nine I stayed in the water and kept playing.

It was time for everyone to get out of the water because everyone was packing up to go home. After I got changed the buses arrived. John, Tai, Riley and I got the back seats. It was fun because every time we hit a bump we would go fly to the top of the bus. As we got to school I was exhausted. I had the best day at the beach.

My Chart About Room 7's Favourite Colour

This is my chart about room seven's favourite colours. Most of the people in in room 7 like blue and purple. Least people like the colour yellow and green. Four people in room seven like the colour red.

Welcome to 2014

Hi my name Sebastian. I am a year six and I am 10 years old. I am in room 7 at Panmure Bridge School. My teachers name is Mrs Miller she is a nice teacher. I am looking forward to the new year. My goal is to get better a my writing.